Song #4 - Over It
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Sorry for the delay, i’m trying to upload the songs every saturday before midnight, but i just moved in a new apartment and we don’t have internet access yet… So yeah there was some frustration that i needed to let go this week, which gave a song with lyrics that must be the crappiest i’ve ever written, but i had to get this out of my system… however now i think it’s true that i need to find a new source of inspiration for the next one, cause the 4 songs are pretty much on the same topic
What i like about it:
I like the second part of the chorus, i like the musical break after the bridge (not this actual musical break but the idea of putting one there)
What I’m not so sure:
As I said i really hate the lyrics especially the bridge, its so stupid.. and “the brainsick chicks” i dont know how i thought that was a nice rhyme it sounds way too Blink182ish to my liking… Also i tried to record the whole thing in an afternoon again, which didnt allow me to try any fancy voice tricks so it doesnt have any sparkle or special something in it
As always, I really appreciate any comments you have!
Over it VERSE 1 There was someone I think I cared about With who i got Quite eager to hang out Was it you? You I think I believe it was you It was a girl, no doubt But blonde or brown? When we went out It must have made me proud Was it you? You I think I believe it was you PRECHORUS I know she liked To fill me up with lies And she could find The ways to waste my time It was you, you Yes I know for sure it was you CHORUS Over it I'm over it Over with faking it Over with the brainsick chicks You told me to wait And I waited Looked for my limit And you reached it Go find someone who likes to babysit Cause I'm over it VERSE 2 Maybe I dreamed this up Boy this is odd There was someone i thought Was just what I sought Was it you? You It's hard to believe it was you PRECHORUS CHORUS BRIDGE So many girls to like So little time You are one of a kind You will be fine The day you'll learn to make up your mind CHORUSPosted under Rock
Salut
Je trouve que la chanson est plus rock un peu c’est bien, ca pourrait même l’être encore plus peut-être surtout si c’est pour passer des frustrations jte dirais lache toi lousse c’est le fun quand ca bouge. J’ai vraiment aimer la phrase: Go find someone who likes to babysit, avec le contexte de la chanson et tout ca m’a fait bien rire c’est efficace. Une chose par contre, jdirais que le truc des répétitions pour que ca reste dans tête c’est bon, mais peut-être un peu trop utilisé. Fac c’est ca! chow!
Very good song. The only thing I don’t really like, is the OOO OOOO voice in the bridge. But, if the same line (OOO OOO) were sung by a rush of electric guitar this could be great.
i like it . i especially like the prechorus. i like the lyrics and the melody. and i think brainsick chick thing really fits the song. so dont change it! haha i love the go find someone who likes to babysit. haha oh boy. i like it. i think there could be like more melodic backgroud either vocals or music..but in general i really like it!!
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