Song #9 - Twist Of Fate
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Fresh from the oven here is Twist Of Fate! It’s a bit more cryptic than my other songs but it’s basically about not letting bad circumstances, bad lucks or bad timing have an effect on your life… I’m pretty good at blaming external causes when i have a problem, that’s something I’m working on and I thought it’s an interesting topic for a song..
What I like about it:
I like the chorus, the lyrics, and the dark feeling of it
What I’m not so sure:
I don’t think that’s the kind of song that would play on the radio… The word “heart” in the chorus doesnt sound as good as it could. There could be a bit more variation in the guitars, to differentiate the chorus and verse more
Alright as usual comments are more than welcome!
Chords
Verse: Em C Am D Chorus: Em C Am Em Bridge: Em D7 Am D7
Lyrics
Twist Of Fate Pushing, pulling Picking up the pace Rushing, rolling Gripping tighter, no getting away Confess, digress Beg to make a mess Resist, desist Every obsession will be addressed CHORUS Tonight we'll make it up For every sin we crave Every stab we take Every twist of fate Tonight we'll make it up For every wrong we trade Every heart we break Every twist of fate Reaching, feeling Use me as you will Lock in, lean in Breathing faster, move in for the kill Kissing, biting Exposing your neck Dancing, screaming Engrave the vision into your head BRIDGE Make your chance Playing with all odds against Control your existencePosted under Rock
À écouter avec des écouteurs !!! Surtout la partie bridge… C’est une chanson intéressante et différente des autres je suis très contente de toi. mais on dirait que tu prononces trop les mots… dans un sens ça fait surement partie du charme de la chanson sauf que ça fais un peu cours de diction.
J’aurais voulu une chanson sur l’action de grâce mais j’imagine que tu vas te reprendre avec l’halloween.
ok bye
haha ouais ché pas pourquoi l’action de grâce ca m’inspire pas tant que ca… ouais c’est la première toune que je fais avec mes super broches alors pour la prononciation ca chie un peu mais je vais surement m’habituer un jour! a+!
Nice write thought the chorus was well written .gave a nice punch. not much to add good luck with the production
Reaching, feeling
Use me as you will
Lock in, lean in
Breathing faster, move in for the kill
thats my favorite part cuz i can feel it. like the rest though also
Nice. It’s different from the other song the rythm is different and it truly feels darker. The only thing I’m not sure about is the bridge. A lot of different pitches, the balance that changes fast, etc. I think it’s too much effects at the same place. Everything else seems good to me!
yeah for the effect of the bridge i find contrarily to sylv that it sounds better without headphones cause change of panning left and right is too wide but i couldnt figure out how to reduce it in the effect settings
This is another one with is proper personality. After 9 songs you still able to avoid repetition. This is good.
This is the kind of songs, where the final touch will be important. For example in the bridge, you will have to pay attention to the exact pan power to apply, to be sure it’s pleasant to hearing.
Otherwise, this frame provide a lot of percussion’s possibilities and other instrument’s settings to produce spectacular and funny sounds to hear.
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