Song #12 - Get Up The Floor
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Frustrations coming out in this week’s song… i needed to go back to my roots a bit and sing just like when i was 18… i dont plan on doing this very often, but i just didnt feel like filtering anything just screaming whatever i want and not caring about it sounds… but next week will be back to normal style
What I like about it:
I like the verses, especially the last one…
What I’m not so sure:
After the last verse which is very energetic, the chorus seems to let down a bit… also the bridge is not incredibly creative.. some high screaming parts have pitch issues and sound a bit weird
Well once again not too much time to write i’m going to see Melissa Auf Der Maur tonight… As always comments & suggestions are welcomed!
Later
Get Up The Floor Tuning: One step down F#m D C# F#m Pull me in every direction I told you i wasn't ready But you know what, just bring it on Lets bring one of us to his knees We'll see if i can take this on If i fall, i'll drag you with me This scar to remember me from My gift to you, here, enjoy it F#m D C# Im on the floor Im on the floor Just finish me off Im on the floor Im on the floor Im on the floor Just finish me off What are you waiting for One quick blow To end this once for all I know i wont get any sleep Thrust the pillow over my ears With every fingers and I still hear Your searing laughter and his scream Just one more memory to repress I'm not letting it get to me So bring it on, now i'm all set Let's bring one of us to his knees B G D A Don't stop, don't stop Get back up I have to give it all i got Don't stop, don't stop Get back up No fight's ever won giving up Get up the floor! Get up the floor Get up the floor I'll rise stronger than ever before Get up the floor Get up the floor Through those hardships Find out who you a a a a a re Through those hardships Find out who you Through those hardships Find out who you Through those hardships Find out who you arePosted under Rock
les back vocals sont totalement comme dans le temps. cé rafraichissant. lol!
I think that the silences between the cuts in the first part of the verses are too long. It breaks the beat. I like the bridge, it’s really effective. I don’t know if you put a lot of effects on the voice, but in some parts it feels weird.
yeah i recorded as fast as i could because i did it in my roommate’s room (since i dont have a room) and i didnt know when she would be coming back… but the good news is im moving to my new place tonight and ill finally have a room to myself and soon get some decent conditions to write and record
Broadly, the song is not to bad. But, as you said in your intro, it’s like you have some problem with the pitch. The song it’s a little bit out of your voice range. So your voice get quality loses.
But the things that disturbing me more, is a pronunciation case. All the time, I hear: I “MON” the floor. I think it will be better if you insist in the first part like:
I’M “ON” the floor…
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