Song #15 - Come With Me
– edit: jan-25-09: The band asked me to remove the song, i respect that so i’m taking it offline, i hope most of you had time to listen to it, if not well im gonna be back with new stuff soon…
Wow it’s been a while! feels good to be writing here again! I’ve got great things coming, i started a new band (we’re still looking for a drummer btw) and i got 86,5% of my motivation back, so for now i’m not officially restarting one song a week, but i will definitely try to update it as often as possible and most probably restart very soon
Now about this song, i just want to specify that the music track is not from me (a band sent me the track so i could find the lyrics and melody… ill give them proper credits once i find their name!) Hope you like it and the next one i will try to write it with a guy I met recently who does electro stuff, we had a jam and it rocked!! I’ll keep you posted!
What I like about it:
I like most of the lyrics and the first part of the chorus. I finally put the work into making a proper bridge and ending, it makes a difference for sure
What I’m not so sure:
Overall I like it, except it’s not exactly the style I’m aiming for, that’s gonna be my main focus in the next songs… more dancy more rock.. also the chorus is a bit wordy
Latah
Lyrics & Chords
Come With Me Verse: D G, Chorus: D A Em G, Bridge: Bm G D A You said you found a perfect place Different stars at which to gaze A city with a friendlier face But in the least expected way Your life took a serious hit You won't be able to leave just yet But i'm here, you're here What do you say? I say come with me CHORUS Come with me, you will see The sun will shine in our heads Come with me, and we will Make the best of this snowy hell You'll dream of your kangaroos I'll dream of my beach house in Malibu Add a few good times to the pile Before we have to say goodbye
I can't deny, it's tough a ride But i'll be there by your side It will be over before you realize Then you'll be running around the world A new adventure at every turn For now, come with me CHORUS BRIDGE I know this great venue A perfect fit for you Feel like trying something new? Then come with me CHORUSPosted under Rock
I’m glad you came back! This is a really good song, I like the lyrics, the voice is clean, everything is pretty neat, but maybe you could have put more energy in your voice in some parts. Like when you sing “which to gaze”, there’s a small break just before and the beat changes but your voice stays the same. I would give more power in those parts. Everything else seems good to me, bye bye!
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