Song #18 - On Your Own
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Heyyy! alright so this was week was pretty hectic but thanks to my new life companion (iphone), i dont waste a single second… now i can write my songs while im in the metro! (even if people stare at me weird when i sing…) anyways here’s this week song, dedicated to all the nice guys around the world (including myself) to kick yourself in the butt and take command!
Thanks to everyone who commented in the last song, keep them coming!
What I like about it:
I like the verses melody, and the timbre of the voice during those verses
What I’m not so sure:
The lyrics sometimes get a bit cliché… the ending is a bit too ordinary
Lyrics & chords
On Your Own Capo 1st fret Verse & chorus: Bm D/F# Asus4-A Bridge: E G A VERSE Grew up on a peaceful land A tight family and caring friends Everyone was there to lend A helping hand Don't raise your voice don't argue They would always get the best for you You didn't need to think it through You just went along CHORUS But now you're on your own But now you're on your own Out there into this selfish world, alone But now you re on your own But now you re on your own You've played nice and they played you like a pawn Out there into this selfish world, alone You gotta grab your devils by the horns Cause now you're on your own VERSE2 When everything is said and done You'll be living with your decisions And the ones you never made Have the most bitter taste So you must paddle constantly Or you'll go off course instantly A long time ago you could let it be And get lazy CHORUS BRIDGE Don't be afraid Don't lose your base Steady and straight Steady and straight Don't be afraid Don't lose your base Steady and straight Reclaim your space CHORUSPosted under Rock
J’aime le sujet, vraiment une bonne idée. l’ensemble est cool mais pas une de tes meilleurs, il manque un punch ou de quoi. continu ton bon travail té bon, té fin, té capable et té bo, jeune et en santé.
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Nice song, but… something is missing. Or maybe I think it sounds too robotic in the chorus, not enough feeling in it. I really like the verses, but maybe the melody in the chorus should be more different than the verse. But over all, it’s a good song and your voice sounds really great on it!
Not a bad song. Some little glitches.
I think it’s the kind of song designed to have a loud band background. It’s like if only acoustic guitar it’s to poor. I would like to hear that, with big drums and massive electric guitars.
It’s seems like there is a miss chords change at the end of “And the ones you never made
“ (verse 2) Also, in the chorus it’s like you run about you’re breath.
I like the transition to the bridge, and the bridge.
This song would deserve one second chance
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