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Aug-22-2009

Song #19 - Turn It Up!

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Alright, well im happy i can put a new song online tonight, cause i’m still struggling with my throat infection, i went through antibiotics and still almost no improvement, but i knew i needed to finish this song or else i would be too pissed off the rest of the week! So, its not the best voice quality you’ll hear but overall i think it has some potential…. don’t hesitate to leave your comments!!! later!

What I like about it:

I like the punch of the Oh, in the back vocals of the chorus… i like the fact that the words of the chorus are really simple to learn

What I’m not so sure:

I would have liked to try some more variety in the final verse and chorus.. im not totally sure if the second part of the chorus really fits or if i should have just kept the turn it up pattern

Lyrics

Turn It Up!

VERSE
The way the day began
It was evident
It'd be another to forget
So tired, oh so dead
You barely could get out of bed

Already running late
The deadly fight breaks
It's you or this tube of toothpaste
At work everyone's mad
You rush the headphones to your head

CHORUS
Oh you turn it up!
Oh you turn it up!
You turn it all the way up
Oh you turn it up!
Oh you turn it up!
You turn it all the way up
You wanna dance till you drop
You turn it all the way up

VERSE 2
Right when the clock hits four
You run out the door
The moment you've been waiting for
Meet your date, it's going great
It's good to see the wind has changed

You knock your beer over
Spill it all on her
Then she takes off with the waiter
Whatever, whatever
You go home and you blast the speakers

CHORUS

BRIDGE
The guy downstairs
Pulls out his hair
Nobody's gonna sleep tonight
You jump around In underwears
Nobody's gonna sleep tonight
You're feeling like a millionnaire
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  1. sam Said,

    When the song started I felt like I was watching an 80’s movie, like in Bio-dome when they dance. The chorus is catchy and entertaining, but I think the beat of the song is maybe too slow or too electronic.
    Sam

  2. Jannie Said,

    Je vais dire comme Sam, ça fait année 80! J’aime le refrain et ta voix, mais on dirait que le beat très rythmé et ta voix un peu plus slow me donne l’impression d’écouter deux chansons en même temps. J’ai bien aimé les paroles!

  3. Louis Said,

    yes i was definitely going for an 80’s sound on that one, but agreed, i should throw in some more modern sound as well

  4. JP Said,

    Good song. A lot of little things, in the voice and instruments.
    The chorus is great.
    The beat is special. Energetic, but is this a king of beat that is difficult to dance ?
    Any way, not all the songs are there for dancing.

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